Another Arty Script... But Come See What's wrong

[BaKaRa]

Hi !!!
I made my own arty script ( who is funny   ), but i need a good english ( I used SideChat to ask the arty, but i think is not good english)
So Someone please correct these few lines... If they have to...

"Heavy Mortar Team, I need your Help at Hf69. Thanks"

"Ok, the team is working on."

"Hey, Asshole! We have some gifts for you..."

"Out Of Shells! I hope it's enough."

"Anybody in house, all in hell"

"Sounds Great, Over"

Thanks for your time  

[Chris Death]

 

Are you working on a book or on a mission?

I mean are you here to improve your grammar or
your mission editor skills?

~S~ CD

[BaKaRa]

On a mission of course  
But i don't want to have an uncorrect english language in it  
That's all

[Artak]

paste that stuff to Microsoft Word and use the spelling check there, or buy a dictionary or use one on the internet.

[macguba]

It's not a question of dictionaries or grammar books.     BaKaRa, what you've got is fine:  spelling is all ok and it makes sense.   Artak's suggestion is a good one - get Word to check the spelling for you.   (Don't use their grammar though, a lot of it is flat wrong.)

Here are some suggestions too, if you want to use them.


Bravo 1 - "Bravo 1 to Heavy Mortar Team, we have trade for you at Hf69."

HMT - "Mortar Team.    Inbound in 10 seconds."

HMT - "Hey, losers!    We have some gifts for you..."

HMT - "Check firing!   Bravo 1, have they had enough?"

Bravo1 - "Who cares, they've all gone to hell."

HMT - "Best place for them.   Standing by for next fire mission."

[BaKaRa]

I am french so my " word " don't understand english...
THanks you all for your time and particullary macguba, who is always where we need him for help  ;D
If i was near you, i'll give you a BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG  
lol
See You Later guys