Looks good, but there's one thing i would remove from the
tutorial:
if you wish to use this in your missions or copy it you are welcome to. But give me credit.
This line doesn't really fit into this tutorial, as ppl would have
to give you credits for things like: titletext messages, or
~x delay.
Those commands, you've mentioned in your tutorial you surely
didn't figure out on your own, did you?
When following your guide, i would then miss the credits where
you've got it from
Anyway, no offence meant here - good job
~S~ CD