Hey Gruntage I tested your mission yesterday and it's so great.
Played with CWA 1.99, Veteran and I chose "hard mode"
I think SBG told u the necessary, so I give u a suggestion. I liked the patrols at the town, but I think you should Fix your patrol script, because the crew units aren't synchronized with the script, because I've killed one of them and the alarm wasn't activated. I also want to tell u, it'd be better if you add some voices to the mission, for the outro, and maybe add music when the units be talking in the outro.
Well, that's all my friend. I'll be waiting for your next version, and I say again, Great mission pal. I uploaded a picture.
P.S Do you know to speak spanish?
Cheers,
Aldo15