(Review Completed) [SP] Fida'i - Checkpoint (polished edition)

[LCD]

thx both testers... new version soon

@ firecontrol

leave politics aside 4 real life... here its ArmA board

yeah all soldiers voiceovers r in hebrew...

@ MrN i dont think in real life ny1 can just park a car near checkpoint and run away (think bout what u as a soldier wud have done...) nd changin it wolfrugs idea wud b 2 much work (specialy sine im gonna start workin on a cool new mision soon) so i guess ill leave it as it is

goona work out on da voices lil more... nd cchange last part of outro too

thx again 4 all

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[Denz]

Last one for this morning because I have to get to work. They don't pay us poor MD staffers enough to just play ArmA all day. I didn't even get a secretary 

Package
A readme and the mission file

Overview
Good text and a good shot of the checkpoint.

Intro
A nice little scene. It could do with a capital 'H' for Hadaf.

Briefing
A very good outline of the mission.
No gear selection but then it's not really appropriate for this mission.

Mission
For such a short mission it took a few retries to complete it before I got my strategy worked out. Leave your Brother up by the truck. Sneak up and take care of the snoozing sentry shooting him with his own silenced pistol *insert evil laugh here* and the patrolling soldier should he show up.
Wait for the explosion then it's a hectic few seconds as I take out the checkpoint guards. Take the last man up to the truck mission complete.
typo in debriefing
recieved > received

Outro
Pretty good. The scene with the reporter at the check point was very well done. The end scene could do with expanding.

Summary
Considering my mission duration was 5 minutes, it's sure not that easy to complete, but it does entertain. There is some very good scripting going on through out.  The time selection is good although I can't see much difference in the way things look at the different times.
Whats that smoke to the West?

Project Beta Approved

[LCD]

please review

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[Cheetah]

Tatatadaa! Got this one for review..

Review completed.

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