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Offline El Fisho

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My Briefing
« on: 03 Oct 2005, 22:21:24 »
People I am very sorry about this but I've fryed my brain on this for ages.

My briefing dosn't work and when I tryed to fix it things got worse, I've spent ages attempting to fix this but to no avail, I can't help thinking I'm missing somthing very very obvious but you know how it is.

At first one of my extra pages was in my objective bullets for some reason and then when I attempted to fix it the objectives disappeared completely, noooooooooo >:(

At least the notes work, lol

If someone could read it over and tell me where its all gone wrong that would be fab

Sorry for my n00bishness in briefing making :-[, and thanks in advance for any answers  



"<html>

<body bgcolor="#FFFFFF">


<h2><a name="Main"></a></h2>
<h6>
<b>18th April 1995</b>
<br><br>
Its weird, I've been watching the events here unfold on the news, I knew we'd probably end up coming out here but its still been a complete suprise.<br>
Everyday things get hotter, the embassy staff are trapped, what must it be like for them stuck there. We have to get them out tonight, the enemy are getting even closer to the capital.<br>
The men are all fired up and ready to go but I am less optimistic. I've been here before, I remember it well. The mob of civilians desperatly asking us to take their children, but how could we? That day still haunts my nightmares today.<br>
But I won't let that happen again, tonight will be different.
Its my little bros first time out of training, I'm just praying he'll stay safe, I asked for him to be in my squad but they wouldn't allow it. Please let him stay safe.
<br><br>

</h6>
<hr>


<p><a name="plan"></a>
The embassy staff must be evacuated. The embassy is <a href="marker:embassy">here.</a><br>
Here is some background infomation on the Tonal <A HREF="#Situation">Situation</A><br>
We need to get those men and women out, tonight. This was going to take place in the morning but as I'm sure you know <a href="#recent events">recent events</a> have made this an impossibility.<br>
<br>
Ok, here are the main objectives, and <a href="#Detailed Orders">here</a> are the detailed orders of how to objectives are to be achived.
</p>
<hr>

<p><a name =" OBJ_1"></a>Insert <a href="marker:insert">here</a>, and procede to the FUP (form up point).

</p>
<hr>
<p><a name =" OBJ_2"></a> Once at the FUP, wait for Chalie team before moving in to secure<a href="marker:shantytown"> the shanty town.</a>
</p>
<hr>

<p><a name =" OBJ_3"</a> Chalie will hold the town while you procede to <a href="marker:embassy">the embassy</a> and resque the staff.
</p>
<hr>

<p><a name =" OBJ_4"</a> Procede with the embassy staff to the evac point, there will be a chopper to pick you up.
</p>
<hr>

<p><a name =" OBJ_5"</a> The embassy staff must survive.
</p>
<hr>




<h2><a name="Situation"></a>Situation</h2>
<h4>
<br>
The situation on Tonal dates back 2 years, in 1993 a new facist government came into power. There was great oposition from the extreme left wing party "the peoples front".<br>
There where endless recounts but it seemed the goverment had won, no one knows if the election was fixed, there is a chance it was rigged both ways. But in the end the new facist government took power<br>
The peoples front became desperate and their followers began small scale violence and riots. The police responce was to execute 50 accused in the centre of the capital.<br>
This sparked even more hatred and the violence quickly esculated to car bombings and shootings. The govenment responded equally heavy handedly. The fighting grew into a full scale civil war with the world looking on helpless.
The USA sided with them government and provided supplys and weapons. But the government went over the edge when it whiped out a whole village for treason. This was leaked to the world media and there was a huge scandle which resulted in the
resignation of a senior US defence offical.<br>
The goverment has been losing ground to the milita ever since who have been supposedly buying arms from Russia although Russian President strenuously denies and involvment.<br>
In recent months it appears that the government forces have crumbled resulting in the widespread retreat of all government forses. Now only the area around the capital is under their control and the milita could strike at any moment.<br>
If the peoples front get hold of the embassy staff they will meet a horrific death, we have to get them out.
<br><br><br>
</h4>
<hr>




<h2><a name="recent events"></a>Recent Events</h2>
<h4>
<br>
In the last few days the government lanched one last desperate armoured and mechanized infantry counter attack, they recived a crushing defeat.<br>
There is now no defence for the capital and one attack by the milita have been making terriying progress .<br>
In the last few hours the peoples front have launched one almighty offensive and are nearing the embassy. We had been planning the extraction for tomorow at 11:00, but it is clear that is no longer an option.<br>
The last transmission we recived suggests the embassy is now under milita hands and the staff are currently captive, we must ensure they come to no harm.
</h4>
<hr>




<h2><a name="Detailed Orders"></a>Detailed Orders</h2>
<h4>
<br>
<b>Operation name:</b> Tonal Embassy Evacuation
<br>
<b>Theater of operations:</b> Tonal Island
<br>
<b>Time of Insertion:</b> Roughly 2:00am
<br>
<b>Mission Aim(s):</b> Evacuate US embassy staff
<br>
<br>
You will insert on the outskirts of <a href="marker:capital">the capital</a>.<br>
Firstly get to the FUP and wait for Chalie team, when your are both at the FUPs move in ans seize the town, remember timing is critical. We must move fast while we still
have the element of suprise<br>
Once the town is secured get to the embassy and fast. Chalie will hold out against reinforcements from the west and hopfully troops to the east will be to busy engaging govement forces to bother us.
<br>
Secure the embassy staff and get them to the extraction point <a href="marker:evac">here</a>. Call the chopper and get out of there.<br>
Chalie team will then fall back to this <a href="marker:evac2">evac point</a>.<br>
It is essential the embassy staff survive <b>whatever</b> the cost.<br>
Good luck Captian Johnson, hope to see you soon.
</h4>
<hr>


<h2><a name="Debriefing:End1">Mission Accomplished</a></h2>
<p><br><br>
Well done!  You got the embassy staff out<br><br>

Don't feel bad about Chalie team, I know your brother was with them but rest assured there was nothing you could do.

</p>
<br>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End2">Mission Failed</a></h2>
<p><br><br>
The embassy staff died, our worst fears came true, this is a political disaster, maybe you don't deserve your rank captain.

<br><br>
</p>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End3">Unspecified</a></h2>
<p><br><br>


</p>
<br>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End4">Unspecified</a></h2>
<p><br><br>


<br>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End5">Unspecified</a></h2>
<p><br><br>
</p>
<br>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End6">Unspecified</a></h2>
<p></p>
<br>
<hr>

</body>
</html>"

Offline bedges

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Re:My Briefing
« Reply #1 on: 03 Oct 2005, 23:20:22 »
a few missing brackets here and there, and also spaces in your links. one or two typos in the text too, but here's the fixed-up version.

Code: [Select]
<html>

<body bgcolor="#FFFFFF">


<h2><a name="Main"></a></h2>
<h6>
<b>18th April 1995</b>
<br><br>
Its weird, I've been watching the events here unfold on the news, I knew we'd probably end up coming out here but its still

been a complete suprise.<br>
Everyday things get hotter, the embassy staff are trapped, what must it be like for them stuck there. We have to get them

out tonight, the enemy are getting even closer to the capital.<br>
The men are all fired up and ready to go but I am less optimistic. I've been here before, I remember it well. The mob of

civilians desperatly asking us to take their children, but how could we? That day still haunts my nightmares today.<br>
But I won't let that happen again, tonight will be different.
Its my little bros first time out of training, I'm just praying he'll stay safe, I asked for him to be in my squad but they

wouldn't allow it. Please let him stay safe.
<br><br>

</h6>
<hr>


<p><a name="plan"></a>
The embassy staff must be evacuated. The embassy is <a href="marker:embassy">here.</a><br>
Here is some background infomation on the Tonal <A HREF="#Situation">Situation</A><br>
We need to get those men and women out, tonight. This was going to take place in the morning but as I'm sure you know <a

href="#recent_events">recent events</a> have made this an impossibility.<br>
<br>
Ok, here are the main objectives, and <a href="#Detailed_Orders">here</a> are the detailed orders of how to objectives are

to be achieved.
</p>

<h2>Objectives:</h2>

<hr>

<p><a name ="OBJ_1"></a>
Insert <a href="marker:insert">here</a>, and procede to the FUP (form up point).
</p>


<hr>


<p><a name ="OBJ_2"></a>
Once at the FUP, wait for Chalie team before moving in to secure<a href="marker:shantytown"> the shanty town.</a>
</p>


<hr>


<p><a name ="OBJ_3"></a>
Chalie will hold the town while you procede to <a href="marker:embassy">the embassy</a> and resque the staff.
</p>


<hr>


<p><a name ="OBJ_4"></a>
Procede with the embassy staff to the evac point, there will be a chopper to pick you up.
</p>


<hr>


<p><a name ="OBJ_5"></a>
The embassy staff must survive.
</p>


<hr>




<h2><a name="Situation"></a>Situation</h2>
<h4>
<br>
The situation on Tonal dates back 2 years, in 1993 a new facist government came into power. There was great oposition from

the extreme left wing party "the peoples front".<br>
There where endless recounts but it seemed the goverment had won, no one knows if the election was fixed, there is a chance

it was rigged both ways. But in the end the new facist government took power<br>
The peoples front became desperate and their followers began small scale violence and riots. The police responce was to

execute 50 accused in the centre of the capital.<br>
This sparked even more hatred and the violence quickly esculated to car bombings and shootings. The govenment responded

equally heavy handedly. The fighting grew into a full scale civil war with the world looking on helpless.
The USA sided with them government and provided supplys and weapons. But the government went over the edge when it whiped

out a whole village for treason. This was leaked to the world media and there was a huge scandle which resulted in the
resignation of a senior US defence offical.<br>
The goverment has been losing ground to the milita ever since who have been supposedly buying arms from Russia although

Russian President strenuously denies and involvment.<br>
In recent months it appears that the government forces have crumbled resulting in the widespread retreat of all government

forses. Now only the area around the capital is under their control and the milita could strike at any moment.<br>
If the peoples front get hold of the embassy staff they will meet a horrific death, we have to get them out.
<br><br><br>
</h4>


<hr>




<h2><a name="recent_events"></a>Recent Events</h2>
<h4>
<br>
In the last few days the government lanched one last desperate armoured and mechanized infantry counter attack, they recived

a crushing defeat.<br>
There is now no defence for the capital and one attack by the milita have been making terriying progress .<br>
In the last few hours the peoples front have launched one almighty offensive and are nearing the embassy. We had been

planning the extraction for tomorow at 11:00, but it is clear that is no longer an option.<br>
The last transmission we recived suggests the embassy is now under milita hands and the staff are currently captive, we must

ensure they come to no harm.
</h4>
<hr>




<h2><a name="Detailed_Orders"></a>Detailed Orders</h2>
<h4>
<br>
<b>Operation name:</b> Tonal Embassy Evacuation
<br>
<b>Theater of operations:</b> Tonal Island
<br>
<b>Time of Insertion:</b> Roughly 2:00am
<br>
<b>Mission Aim(s):</b> Evacuate US embassy staff
<br>
<br>
You will insert on the outskirts of <a href="marker:capital">the capital</a>.<br>
Firstly get to the FUP and wait for Chalie team, when your are both at the FUPs move in ans seize the town, remember timing

is critical. We must move fast while we still
have the element of suprise<br>
Once the town is secured get to the embassy and fast. Chalie will hold out against reinforcements from the west and hopfully

troops to the east will be to busy engaging govement forces to bother us.
<br>
Secure the embassy staff and get them to the extraction point <a href="marker:evac">here</a>. Call the chopper and get out

of there.<br>
Chalie team will then fall back to this <a href="marker:evac2">evac point</a>.<br>
It is essential the embassy staff survive <b>whatever</b> the cost.<br>
Good luck Captian Johnson, hope to see you soon.
</h4>
<hr>


<h2><a name="Debriefing:End1">Mission Accomplished</a></h2>
<p><br><br>
Well done!  You got the embassy staff out<br><br>

Don't feel bad about Chalie team, I know your brother was with them but rest assured there was nothing you could do.

</p>
<br>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End2">Mission Failed</a></h2>
<p><br><br>
The embassy staff died, our worst fears came true, this is a political disaster, maybe you don't deserve your rank captain.

<br><br>
</p>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End3">Unspecified</a></h2>
<p><br><br>


</p>
<br>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End4">Unspecified</a></h2>
<p><br><br>


<br>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End5">Unspecified</a></h2>
<p><br><br>
</p>
<br>
<hr>

<h2><a name="Debriefing:End6">Unspecified</a></h2>
<p></p>
<br>
<hr>

</body>
</html>

and in case the formatting above is screwy, attached is the txt file.
« Last Edit: 03 Oct 2005, 23:21:57 by bedges »

Offline El Fisho

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Re:My Briefing
« Reply #2 on: 04 Oct 2005, 17:24:36 »
cheers bedges  ;D

testing now..........

--edit--

it works, many thanks to you bedges
« Last Edit: 04 Oct 2005, 17:52:38 by El Fisho »