Cheers man, I'll look into those points.
The intro music comes from a game called "X2 the Threat" or something. I never played it, I just found a huge amount of readily accessible sound files on the disk.
The nosebleed was just a cycle through some faces I edited. I must add that I couldn't have done it without you though man, seeing as how you supplied me with that file full of the BIS ones. Chers for that. ;D
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